Wow... This is indeed a poetic way to express one's pain and sadness. I couldnt say more than the fact that your poem is filled with the best words and the best of emotions....

Amazing!!!

Keep writing:))

This is a great poem Saffie.
Even when you didnt have the words to express your emotions you conveyed them by this piece.
Oooh ya, isn't this poetic wisdom? :)
Well I think it is..

Hope all is good with you. !!

I love how you made us unconsciously feel your sadness and depression despite making us believe you were unable to express them through your poems.. Such a beautiful piece !! Much love x

First- I love the wording you use throughout the whole poem. You make us feel your sadness which in my opinion is a great thing though. I can feel the heartbreak you are feeling inside as I have been there. The weeping tears on every bone is a great line! Wow! Iknow ppeople can cry on the inside because they have emotional scars they feel. Your heart can truly weep too as it cries out in pain. And it's hard for you to breathe means you could be having a panic attack. I love all the descriptions yiu use!

Second- when you build up your walls so high its hard when they come crashing down. Love is a fickle thing. Storms I love how you portray them as emotions. Lightning is terrible and the worse of storms. When you hurt you have to be protected. You feel like you have no hero at all and you feel so lost. I also love the storm line as I think rain could be the tears that flow from Your eyes or heart. You don't want anything to get inside your heart.

Ending- the ending has a tint of hope that you want to work on. Sometimes you truly have to write your feelings out. You want to burn all your feelings away and turn the into something amazing and you truly did that with this piece. The wording and flow are amazing. I love the free verse style. And you did a great job with it. This poem is powerful in the message as I said we all need to get our feelings out. 5/5