This is is so very very unique. I'd say it might be one of your best poems ever as it tells a very dark love story.

I love how the princess is summer time as the metaphor is there. A princess is supposed to be warm and bubbly just like the summer months. But deep inside she is crying for help. As it shows she is hiding. I love the rain part too because it starts the downfall of thr girl and rain in my mind is considered sadness and it starts the story off right away which is a great thing in this case. I also like the hiding part because I feel it shows that the girl is hiding from her problems and she wants someone to save her

The third stanza is where the story really pickd up as another guy the savior walks in. She doesn't really have a home right now or she ran away from it so she meets yhis guy who wants her heart. She knows that face anywhere as in they have met before and maybe she has fallen for him before. Yhe imagery is great though I can see the blu eyes and get lost! And pale and winter go so great together!

The approach is always different. Calmly is great as it shows no nerves at all like they were friends before. I like the wording you bring for the guy. He is kind and has a great heart. So a lot of girls would think he is though. He lead her to his home and that is great. I can imagine the scene playing out in my head and they are both happy they found each other.

I love the winter and sad compare for the Prince. You doesnt want to show her his true feelings. I love that you made him angry at himself about it. I also like how you made the reader think or in my mind like he has been hurt before so he won't give his heart away easily. I loveeeee the ending and how you with continue it. He is afraid that he will lose the princess and he did something wrong. This is thrilling! Can't wait to read more. 5/5

Beautifully nature themed poem, summer being the elegant, majestic princess, winter the handsome knight !

Impressively imaginative where is part two ?

BRILLIANT!

Nice work keep writin i enjoy you poems lady.

I love this poem i am reading this again again. . Very nice

Amazing!

An atmospheric, metaphoric, imaginative tale!

What a beautiful piece.love it's magical quality

Certainly worth a reread and still as good, time has not faded its natural gravitating effect !