This was neat how you took the prompt off of the movie! I have only see previews of it, never watched it, so I just guessed it's about dancing. But you completely captured an alluring atmosphere that is easy to picture and see this "web" between the men coming to the performance and the women showing their desire through their presence, costumes, etc. You definitely highlighted the "obsession" and how this is a place of gaudiness and lust..... very vivid imagery and well-expressed! This flowed well and I feel like you told a story, a look past those dark doors.

Keep writing.

Great visuals. I enjoyed the movie's soundtrack the most, the storyline, not as much as it's not that original so I'm glad you based this more on the raw, sensual atmosphere.
It's abstract, has a fast pace due to the constant changing of imagery but I think you balanced it well with the tone.

A good write indeed !

A good write indeed !