by JaneDoeWrites Jul 22, 2013
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
My heart is an open book |
by Beautiful Soul
I honestly don't think this is sad at all. I can see the bit of dark though. But I enjoyed this poem very much because of the wording again. Each stanza holds a story I feel. I think you did a great job including the painting inside the poem and bringing it to life. The imagery is stunning and beautiful. I also loved the two characters and it seems one found the other just at theright time. And now they are two souls who are intertwined. I loved the eending again I think it's the most powerful and the wording is simple but lovely. Great write overall Crystal. You are a beautiful writer :). |
by Tara Kay
Well I wasn't expecting to see that painting but then again I hadn't noticed that you posted this in dark poems. I felt more sadness than darkness when reading this piece but maybe I was reading it wrong, I felt a closeness between two people, lovers at first glance but then on seeing the painting...I changed my perception to a mother and child and that bond that is always there...and maybe it was that they were murdered by life. |