Dreams

by DarkKnight   Jul 22, 2013


I dreamt of You again last night
stood in Our Chapel dressed in white
flowers brightly in Your hair a vision
of love standing there.

Your perfume just seemed to linger
as you placed the ring upon my finger
the one that We both chose together Our vows
of love now and forever.

And when I took You by Your hand
and placed upon it Your wedding band
the look of love upon Your face made
My heart skip and race.

When nervously you said "I Do"
I smiled lovingly back at You and
as I did My heart broke for that is
when I awoke...

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  • 11 years ago

    by dindee

    Sweet but funny too....hehehe,,,sad coz you woke up already...

    good rhyming....

    just a couple of suggestions..

    "flowers brightly in Your hair a vision
    of love standing there."

    --flowers brightly in Your hair
    a vision of love standing there.

    "the one that We both chose together Our
    vows of love now and forever."

    --the one that We both chose together
    Our vows of love now and forever.

    "the look of love upon Your face made
    My heart skip and race."

    --the look of love upon Your face
    made my heart skip and race.

    ...thats all..

    well penned..=)

    • 11 years ago

      by DarkKnight

      Thank you for your comments constructive..Thanks dindee

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