Sweet but funny too....hehehe,,,sad coz you woke up already...

good rhyming....

just a couple of suggestions..

"flowers brightly in Your hair a vision
of love standing there."

--flowers brightly in Your hair
a vision of love standing there.

"the one that We both chose together Our
vows of love now and forever."

--the one that We both chose together
Our vows of love now and forever.

"the look of love upon Your face made
My heart skip and race."

--the look of love upon Your face
made my heart skip and race.

...thats all..

well penned..=)