Comments : One Moment

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Agreed this is truly beautiful.

    • 11 years ago

      by Marky

      Thank you both. Its always hard to find words to express moments like this.. In my head, I haven't done it justice, and I could write about that one moment in time for ever, and never come close :( lol, but thanks again!

  • 11 years ago

    by Mary Daphne

    It gave me shivers 5/5! very lovely poem!

  • 10 years ago

    by Saturos

    Such a beautiful poem, capturing a moment where nothing else matters, but the entwining of two souls sharing an experience of ecstasy, love and pain, and the sharing of those elements. Great imagery, great impressions, 5/5