Comments : Upon The Mountain Top

  • 11 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This was a simple yet easy to picture nature poem! Love how much you have painted for the reader to enjoy in not too many lines, and it all flows very well. I would be in wonder and awe if I saw the northern lights, so that was neat you included that as well as the personifications you made, and counting stars...lovely.

    Keep writing.