Comments : Anger

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Even without your note at the bottom I read two lines and knew this had to be a vent. But knowing that makes it increasingly difficult to comment even though I really want to leave you a stellar comment.

    Although I cannot relate to your situation I can relate to the childs. And it is a devistating thing to understand.

    Your flow was amazing, and your word choice was immaculate even for a vent. But I guess that's because of the massive amounts of emotion leading to the creation of this piece. I know you focused on anger, but there is also a lot of frustration and hurt as well. Which added to the piece even though it was subtle.

  • 11 years ago

    by Britt

    Sometimes our "just needing to vent" writes are some of the most powerful pieces we can create. I really liked how you emphasized pieces with the brackets and felt that was really important here. I also loved the repetition of anger. You definitely got your point across! lol

    I am so sorry for everything you are going through. You have to trust and have faith it WILL get better. Hardships are here and can be used as a valuable learning tool for the future -- good usually comes from the bad, so try to keep positive in that notion! :)