When Summer Met Winter (part two)

by WintersAngel   Jul 24, 2013


The winter prince watched from the woods
As the princess walked through a meadow of flowers
He smiled at her beauty and her shining red hair
Grinning wider as she used her power

He'd grown used to the emotion inside
And learned to hide it from the winter queen
He'd think of her each night
And she was the star of his dreams

They met once a week in a cave between seasons
They shared lunch and fell deeper in love
He would smile at her laugh
She would wish things weren't so tough

The summer princess watched him from her tower
As he sat by the edge of the woods lost in thought
She remembered in the beginning of their friendship
How hard he and his emotions fought

She'd told him it was okay to feel
That there was nothing wrong with a smile
She'd shown him a side most winters didn't know
That he could laugh every once in a while

They knew that their love was forbidden
They knew they could get caught
But the love they felt for each other
Was worth bending the rules alot

He vowed one day
That he would find a way

Wait for part three coming soon!!!

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  • 11 years ago

    by JaM

    The first part of this poem remained steady in flow, as with the second part I feel that there was a line that brought a short halt to that. In your third stanza, you rhymed love, with tough. I feel that every other rhyme was paired well aside from this one. Although it brings a short pause, the feeling is not lost in your words.

    I also enjoyed the broad spectrum in which you convey the details, leaving more to be interpreted by the reader. An example of this is your first stanza in it's entirety. With "the woods", "the meadow of flowers", and "used her power" brings key visuals to the readers' mind.

    I also like that (as a person who watched "Secret of The Wings") you can speculate as to where the inspiration may have come from to explain this tragically beautiful romance.

    Great writing :) Enjoyed both parts. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by broken sword

    I can imagine the wh0le seen clearly.. I think in part 3 they will face problems.. Good job

  • 11 years ago

    by Vic Johns

    This flows well !

  • 11 years ago

    by Curtis Young

    Very good!

  • 11 years ago

    by Bonaventure Onuabuchi

    Splendid write!

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