by WintersAngel Jul 24, 2013
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
The winter prince watched from the woods |
by JaM
The first part of this poem remained steady in flow, as with the second part I feel that there was a line that brought a short halt to that. In your third stanza, you rhymed love, with tough. I feel that every other rhyme was paired well aside from this one. Although it brings a short pause, the feeling is not lost in your words. |
by broken sword
I can imagine the wh0le seen clearly.. I think in part 3 they will face problems.. Good job |
by Vic Johns
This flows well ! |
by Curtis Young
Very good! |
by Bonaventure Onuabuchi
Splendid write! |