by Tara Kay
And it does. You have loved, and people love you...whether or not you believe it or welcome it...whether the events that have happened in the past cloud that judgement, or not. |
Linda, a new piece... yay! (And I hope I'm not sounding weird haha). Glad to read though and your words are powerful here, although it is a sad piece, I hope you are doing okay. |
by Baby Rainbow
Firstly - I think the opening of the poem is good because you use the word "remember" which implies that there has been a time before where things were much better than this, and a time where you could breathe fine and enjoy life. It also gives the impression that this time was far away into the past, and it seems somewhat impossible to retrieve. |