Comments : No Longer Weak

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Oh wow, Ana. This is fabulous. You are so very strong and I wish I could feel tht way. Wonderful, wonderful write.

    • 11 years ago

      by A

      Awe thanks Kiley! I just wish what I wrote was true! :/ but one day we will both feel this way!

  • 11 years ago

    by DirtRoadGirl

    I love this... depression is not an easy thing to go through, but it sure feels good when you beat it. I loveee this <3

    • 11 years ago

      by A

      Thanks! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Alessandra

    I love this! This is absolutely amazing. I wish I could be that strong. 5

    • 11 years ago

      by A

      Thanks and you are strong enough you just don't know it

  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    I love the hope factor to this indeed. I can see the hint of sadness too though.

    I again love the hint of hope in the stanza one. You are choosing to face your fears no matter what it takes and I love that so much. But just remember its totally okay to cry along the way because crying means you are strong not weak. Depression truly does consume your soul so I love that wording. You are willing to work on it and its great.

    Happiness is a hard thing to keep and very easy to lose so we have to charish it no matter what we do. Just remember the darkness will always be creeping along day or night trying to get you back. I hope you can follow the right path.

    I love the hope at the end though because you have always had the strength inside you no matter what. Keep pushing ahead and follow the light! The rhyming is good but the message is great. Love it 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by kim akemi

    Love it u seem tough ;)