by Redangelwings
This poem is so very sad. I love how you used this poem as a story. I can see this based off reality. I can imagine this little girl standing in thmiddle of a dark room crying her eyes out. It seems like she is depressed in this poem and it would make sense as you said it seems like she has been rejected all her life. The very first line is the most powerful one I feel. Its a question that no one usually knows. So again I love the story feel to it. The message is very strong though. I think thrre is a lot of people that can relate yo this poem. I know I can so thats why I was drawn to it. I love thr sad element to it. There seems to be no hope at all which I like a lot. I think you did great! 5/5 |
by SimIsSeiko
Redangelwings, thanks for your kind comment, and I'm glad that you relate to what i write, the sad thing about this poem is, it is reality, and you are right, there is no hope at all |