Comments : Good Old Days

  • 11 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This was such a fun poem to read and your voice spoke strongly, reminiscing when you were a child. Nice inclusion with all the titles, that really added to the piece.

    I've never heard of some of these shows but I do know TMNT... and Tom & Jerry was a classic one I watched too!

    Last stanza: "Their" should be "They're".

    That's great how you wrap it up in the ending with a positive note as well as a good life lesson....we can have those moments of simplicity again, while we may think those days in the past are the best to remember, who knows what will be up ahead? Something even better.

    • 11 years ago

      by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet

      Thank you P the P :) i just thought of my old days since i was with my dad eating a cold cut like we did when he was around more often and this just came to me. i will make the edit and thank you for the love :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Wow, how true this poem is - I can certainly relate!