Comments : Vampirism [senyru]

  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    I love this poem so much from you. I love the feel of dark and love coming together as one and I love how you put so much element into it.

    The first line is so heartfelt as a caress could really mean a lot of things. I can imagine the caress being a kiss on the lips or on the neck since it is vampires haha. I just wonder if vampire kisses are on the neck or do this kiss like humans? :P. I love the second line because thats where the story truly starts a soft kiss on the neck which brings me back to my question lol. I can imagine all this playing out though because its a love story the one vampire falls in love with a human but they can't be together but eternal bliss is on the horizon which is the third line. They can both be together forever now cause love is supposed to last forever right? Lol. But anyways. .. you are an imagery genius because I love how you make our minds run wild with your stories. :)) 5/5