Umm...that first line...whoa. I have to stop and regroup after that one.

I loved the musical references you intertwined into this piece. I feel as if it made for a more whimsical and melodic poem that just flowed into each other.

"Lovemaking clouds" really?! How freakin cool is that! Gosh, that sounds so unique and just works!

I love how you said love can lead to maturity. There is so much truth in that! Love is one of the best life teachers in my opinion and makes us grow up even if we are not ready to.

Love is definitely in control! I loved the form you chose to right with here. It fits the feel of the poem perfectly.

Such a wonderful piece you have here, you used the prompt flawlessly :)