by ted mcdaniel Jul 27, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I thanks raindrops are angels crying because they are sad they which down on us and they see us hurting each other or ourselves why would anyone hurt someone or themselves it make myself sad you see someone hurting someone or someone hurting themselves so will someone help me by giving me a lifejacket because i am drooping because it if flooding here because to many angels are crying |
Great message, magically crafted and written you were able to express such in-depth feelings and emotions. Well done. Keep it up, maybe try separating the stanza's but you have done a fantastic job here nonetheless. |
by Bonaventure Onuabuchi
I like the message of this poem! But sir it would have been a more pleasure if you separate each line of this poem, so that it will be easily read and understood! Thanks, and keep writing! |