You took these prompts and made it look easy, I don't know what I'd have done if I was given those prompts, but trust, you always manage to pull off the most difficult things with such ease.

I LOVE the ending, the thought of tears being able to be corrupted, that is genius, and just ended the piece in such a thought provoking way...

I am loving the tone, it was slight with the darkness but didn't overpower the whole poem, and that was unique in how you made me think and question, with the imagery being vivid enough to understand but still draw on the thoughts it threw up.

Great write as always MA
xxx

Beautiful as always! (:
I instantly knew I'd love this poem as I read -"unbreakable because
there is nothing to shatter."
something about that line stuck out to me and really pulled on my heart strings! Beautiful and simple.

It was different and really stood out, well done! (: 5/5