Broken Heart's Yearn [Senyru]

The first line is great as it brings the whole poem together. As it sulks you do too. You feel alone and you want to feel loved. Just the touch of someone can make your nights so much better. Even holding their hand is a great. You yearn to be with this person and as I said the nights are lonely. But you bring great imagery to this. Which I will explain later. Your heart will always break when you lose your love. Or dont feel loved at all. Which can lead to a lot of other things. Theimagery is great as I said. I can imagine a dark room and you lying in bed hugging your pillow to feel some kind of love or companionship. You are crying longing really. You are wrapped in a blanket to keep warm. Haha. Sorry I am rambling now but. Its great to let all your feelings out. And you did here o feel. 5/5