Comments : The Warriors Song

  • 11 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I love this poem. There was only one misspelling that you should know about... Bread should be bred instead :)

    I love how you put this poem together, it flowed easily and kept the attention of the reader the whole time it was being read.

    • 11 years ago

      by Blood of a Lion

      Ah thank you! I didn't even notice that I blame the English language :P Haha but thanks.

  • 11 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    This is awesome, I could totally see a ban of warriors chanting this as the marched into battle. It has a nice rhythm and flow. Creative idea. (: