Oh wow...fascinating piece. I'm drawn in by the darkness of your words. Fantastic write.

LOVE THIS!! REALLY WELL DONE!

This is a really interesting write. Here is my opinion:

Hell is your life and your are in your depressed state of mind. Your eyes flood with tears and your in a battle with yourself. Blood is everywhere and I actually love the blood as it adds so much to the poem. This world is very chaotic and I love the wording you used for it as you describe the world through your eyes. Thats why you bleed through your eyes because you hate what you see. You just want everyone to be happy but you know they cant be. You have known people who have committed suicide so your world iz madness. But I do love the imagery here you portray so much. I love the length of the poem too as it tells a real story. I love the ending. No one can hear you. Which mean you are truly alone. I love this write! 5/5

Hogg wow bro this was intense please don't ever push away your talent bravo 100/100 your expression is unbelievable