by Lemon Jul 28, 2013
category :
Life, society /
about society
The spring fever died reluctantly |
by Midnight Sky
You had a great flow from beginning to end nicely done 5\5 |
by don
Simply lovely, nice flow to this, |
by Beautiful Soul
This world is a very sad place and it's very hard to trust anyone in life. I loved the strong message you wrote iin this poem here. Your wording is very strong and rings trye to anyone's life. I agree with Tara here. There is good in the world but it is very hard to see and sometimes it is better to be alone for there is no one but us. Very well written! |
by Tara Kay
The world is a place of many different stories, and we often misread and forget that others are hurting, missing, in dark places, searching for happiness, following dreams. But the world can be a better place if we take the time to actually observe more and learn. |