I love the way you use rusty for his heart. As it can be broken and hollow. I love the darkened skies part too. Because your skies in love do seem so dark and love can light up and cure any depression. The moon or sun
woll light up any life. Fears seem so silly when it comes to love. Because love is the cure for most of that when are deep into it. I like the glance part because they are so simple but can melt any heart. The holding of hands is sooo sweet. And can hold any heart steady. You can feel the love of the two people but I love the tease you put into it. The build up is wonderful. Haha.

The lullaby is awesome because you can tell who she is through it. A sweet and caring person who cares deeply for this person. There is always a better place when you are with the one you love. The title used in here is wonderful because it tells the reader how you feel. She is an angel no matter what. I love the ending too. As it shows they will always love each other. I lovethe pure love element here tthough. As it shows your true writing skill. 5/5