This is a great first attempt at your etheree.

I love the direction you bring this. The first line is great as it makes you think. What is it wondering at or thinking about. As your mind is dorment. I love the hope too as your mind or thoughts go very happy. The night is very beautiful in its own way just like each person. We all wish for the stars or to feel free inside or inner peace so I love what you did. Your shy heart now bursts full of life from a simple glance upward. There is something really magical in the stars brings a calm to us. There are so many muses you can use at night. The silence is great. As ot makes you be able to listen to the world around you. I feel so at peace when reading this I love it! 5/5 nominated