W0w its realy great p0em . .u have captured everything in this p0em everything happening in this m0dern w0rld.. We need to wake up otherwise we will l0se everything we have dreamed. .g0od job i realy like this.

I really like this. I like how you put it in your point of view, but one that is shared with many people. The world we have now can be ruthless and complex. You portrayed it nicely in here. Well written.

Wow I think we all dream to live in a world of peace. I know I do. I love the way you worded this. We are all full of darkness and we know not the light in this world. We really do fall into the wrong path. I love the honesty of this though and the way you feel is amazing. I love the elements of sad and the hope you portray at the end. We really do need to come together. Feel the love the Lord has given us inside. :)). I love the message this portrays excellent 5/5

Great words.