I love this. Each stanza is really strong and it fits so well together.

I like the foreshadowing in the beginning, how it feels like there is a problem but the reader is not 100% of what it is yet. I like it. Sets the tone for the whole piece.

I love rhyming poems... I do. And the rhyme here seems effortless and works well. The flow is great, I like the topic. Really lovely.

It's amazing, actually, how quickly feelings can change. Truly. Get so caught up in someone that you don't notice any changes until you stop to look at it. Nicely touched on here.

Definitely a 5/5