Powerful emotions in these lines, with that simple image of you being in the a dark forest at night, no one coming to your rescue or hearing those screams. Those last two lines were beautifully worded, and spoke of the fears/darkness we can overcome, not on our own all the time but it can be conquered. Good poem describing that atmosphere of being lose, abandoned and wanting to just be heard. Well-expressed. Keep writing! |
by Love Hurts
Thank you :) |