My Love

I love this poem as a whole. its hard to know what to do when you have never fallen in love. All you can do is explore your feelings and see if they feel thr same way inside. I think its easier if you have known them for a long time. I love the feelings you share though all making your heart flutter. Love really does save you from your self. I also love the knife drop. It tells me you have been hurt so many times in your past and this person has truly saved you. You make this person sound like your only hero and sometimes thats all you need.

Your heart is the one that falls in love and sometimes you can't help how you feel at all!! You are always afraid of losing or hurting the ones you love. I think everyone has this fear though. As you say at the end you fall in love more everyday which means you have known them for a while. Fires always grow between two people. Your hearts says it all. I love the rhymes and the way you describe everything about you and this person. So cute! 5/5

This is cute who is the lucky girl ;)