by Robert Aug 2, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I tore open my chest |
by Meena Krish
This is well written and so moving. It has a lot |
Really good. Deep & with lot of sadness captured behind every single word. |
by JaM
That was an awesome write!! I enjoyed your style of writing, as well as your creative abilities to portray your message. I mostly like that I am able to relate. When a author is able to make a reader feel like they're reading about themselves, it's a great reward. To know that someone else understands, in some cases-to think there is hope for an ending like that for themselves. It was also nice that it did have a happier ending as it was certainly a heartfelt poem. Great job Robert!! 5/5 |
by WintersAngel
Oh wow I love it!!! |
by Vic Johns
I agree with Everlasting, it's a work of beauty and should be under the love category! |