Robert, this is moving. I can see why it's place under sad cathegory because most of the story is sad but I like the ending and also how well you painted the image of nature and the ending really got to me. I kind of feel melancholy right now yet I do feel like flying, some type of warm feeling too ..

Great job keep it up 5

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I agree with Everlasting, it's a work of beauty and should be under the love category!

Oh wow I love it!!!

That was an awesome write!! I enjoyed your style of writing, as well as your creative abilities to portray your message. I mostly like that I am able to relate. When a author is able to make a reader feel like they're reading about themselves, it's a great reward. To know that someone else understands, in some cases-to think there is hope for an ending like that for themselves. It was also nice that it did have a happier ending as it was certainly a heartfelt poem. Great job Robert!! 5/5

Really good. Deep & with lot of sadness captured behind every single word.

all the best & take care

This is well written and so moving. It has a lot
of depth and behind each line there is untold emotions which one can relate to..take care.