I love the emotion you show in the first stanza here. Its amazing how honest you are in your poems. You showthe depression taking over and you finally let it all go from your eyes. Crying is an eexcellent release that helps a lot. I love how you use swept away as darkness is not a great thing. It will consume you like nothing. I love everything about this as it truly shows what depression can do. You portray it so well.

I love that you use sadness and dark as the sea. You can really drown in nothing. When you are alone with your thoughts its a horrible feeling. They really do want to take over. I love the word insecure as it shows how you feel about your self and that might be the cause of something in the past. I love how you used your thoughts as capturing. They lock you away feeling like nothing.

When your soul is broken tattered you lose your concept of reality. I love how your heart is shattered and the element of sadness through out the poem. I love how you left the character with no hope at all. Youwwrote an excellent peace. 5/5

I feel this every night, scared what the darks gonna do when it fully consumes me. Great write!