Get Me By

The focusing is what made it flow, the twist, from the title my expectations were far from what you have written ,I love the ending

She's not one to question
Can never make you cry
the one you can fall back on
That alluring get me by

I can relate to that.

I absolutly loved it. We have all been there, and lived in the moment you speak. And some of us have been that get me by person. Truely a great poem, you are a talent writer. Reading more, keep it up!! 5/5

This poem really touched my heart because I think oneglance of a women is all you need to get your heart ffluttering. I loved the feeling you bring here though. The first stanza tells the whole story though because you have a broken heart and it seems like through out the whole poem you are trying to move on from this person. That is just my opinion. I think anyone can seem alluring when you hurt all we want is someone to fix a hurt heart. 5/5

I like the word usage. Did not expect it to have this kind of story by reading just the title. And how you focused on the other girl, rather than the heartbreaker. Also, LOVE how you described the get-me-by girl as prosaic. She's plain, not that great looking, probably.. from what I'm getting, at least.

5/5

Again, this one is so different from your other poems.
Here the theme is love too, but it tells the other story --showing two aspects of love at d same time.
One that you are broken by someone and you cant have her but at the same time you got someone who makes you feel complete, but you cant love her.
Nice piece, bro.