by WintersAngel
Very nice piece. It's always great when we find someone to take away the pain. Great write. |
by Kate
I love the rhyme in the poem and it flows very nicely. |
by Love Fallacy
Thank you. I love to be able to tell a simple story but deliver as much emotion and feelings as possible. |
So true, the way we use people for our own selfish lust! Strikes a chord! |
by Amreen
Another amazing piece. so much of emotions and sadness in the poem. Love the rhymes you use. Its actually nice to have someone who can be with you in need. |
by Black pearl
Again, this one is so different from your other poems. |
by Liz
I like the word usage. Did not expect it to have this kind of story by reading just the title. And how you focused on the other girl, rather than the heartbreaker. Also, LOVE how you described the get-me-by girl as prosaic. She's plain, not that great looking, probably.. from what I'm getting, at least. |
by Redangelwings
This poem really touched my heart because I think oneglance of a women is all you need to get your heart ffluttering. I loved the feeling you bring here though. The first stanza tells the whole story though because you have a broken heart and it seems like through out the whole poem you are trying to move on from this person. That is just my opinion. I think anyone can seem alluring when you hurt all we want is someone to fix a hurt heart. 5/5 |
by TragicChaos
I absolutly loved it. We have all been there, and lived in the moment you speak. And some of us have been that get me by person. Truely a great poem, you are a talent writer. Reading more, keep it up!! 5/5 |
by DarkLight
The focusing is what made it flow, the twist, from the title my expectations were far from what you have written ,I love the ending |