by Amreen
Lovely.. ! |
by Aveena
This was a lovely piece, it had me on edge. |
by Robert
I thought this was written with a good amount of time put into it. I would like to add though that your 5th stanza need's work. Typo's are in due need of help since you didn't read this over before posting haha. Nice work though. |
by TSI25
Devastatingly sad. its a classic story in some modern romance movies. i hope this hasnt happened to you. structurally the poem is sound and it has good flow. some of it felt a bit like slang - for instance "of this i am for sure" isnt wrong grammatically i dont think, but it feels a bit clumsy. maybe another proof reading aloud could be beneficial. |
Beautiful.. |