by Larry Chamberlin Aug 6, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Like a topsy-turvy confection |
Larry, can you please get a medal for writing of these two characters and telling their story from the prompts? It's amazing how much you've said and how natural it sounds given the amount of words/phrases... plus, it was me who challenged you and thought of the title! So I was thinking maybe a life poem or humorous poem? But then you truly made it deeper with the significance of their lives turning upside down. Awesome job with this! Has a kind of fantasy feel like a lowly man who is worshipping a queen, she is fooled by his beauty yet she can never understand who he truly is because he keeps betraying. |
by nouriguess
I don't believe this... I just don't. You're just GOOD at making these cliche prompts draw such an original image in my mind. |
They actually tell me a story & I simply record it. |