Comments : Pineapple Upside-down Cake

  • 11 years ago

    by nouriguess

    I don't believe this... I just don't. You're just GOOD at making these cliche prompts draw such an original image in my mind.

    • 11 years ago

      by Larry Chamberlin

      They actually tell me a story & I simply record it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Larry, can you please get a medal for writing of these two characters and telling their story from the prompts? It's amazing how much you've said and how natural it sounds given the amount of words/phrases... plus, it was me who challenged you and thought of the title! So I was thinking maybe a life poem or humorous poem? But then you truly made it deeper with the significance of their lives turning upside down. Awesome job with this! Has a kind of fantasy feel like a lowly man who is worshipping a queen, she is fooled by his beauty yet she can never understand who he truly is because he keeps betraying.

    I think you're going to be the first person people are going to go to with many many exceptions and rules that you must abide by lol :]