by CathyButterflyJC Aug 6, 2013
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
One day you'll appear before me |
by onethuscome
I feel suffocated. I can't breathe. No I'm only kidding (then again!) It is very clear you have a passionate soul and some lucky guy is going to be, if not already, the beneficiary of that big heart. Just don't let him read this or you'll scare the be-jesus out of him. I, on the other hand, sitting at a safe distance, highly secured, can appreciate this for the lovely piece it is. |
by Mohan
You have a lot of skill to writing about love. |
My favorite lines " Passion upon your pupil And rose peddles amongst the white" beautiful piece girly. |
by Aubrey
This is so pretty...i can feel the love in this poem...great job...5/5 |