Dark world
by Rose Aug 6, 2013
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My dark world |
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11 years ago
Exellent paradoxes expressed here, though I would personally cut it short and only keep
"My dark world
where i see not with my eyes
but with my pain
my dark world
where i smell not with my nose
but with regret
my dark world
where i smile not with my lips
but with tears running down my face "
Beautiful poem 5/5
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11 years ago
by Angel
Imagery is my favorite part of every poem and you execute it wonderfully here. i am absolutaly in love with this poem. it is so on my favs list
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11 years ago
by Angel
Imagery is my favorite part of every poem and you execute it wonderfully here. i am absolutaly in love with this poem. it is so on my favs list
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11 years ago
by WintersAngel
Wonderful piece. I love the darkness.
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11 years ago
by Rose
Thank you wintersangel
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