by Daylight Lucidity Aug 6, 2013
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Sensitive tears brush along porcelain cheeks, remembrance strong in the biting night air; |
by Kate
Your words hold such a delicate picture. The imagery and emotion put into the poem is one that is so easy to spot and you drive home that feeling. I love the tale, two people in love but not fully complete until they find themselves. It's a bittersweet but very lovely story. The words are great, the flow is great. It's amazing. |