Comments : My stolen heart

  • 11 years ago

    by HeightenedAwareness

    Sweet poem..

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    Giving away the key to your heart is a tough thing to do. Its tough when you love someone and you learn to trust them. In the second line of the first stanza to should be too. Sometimes we are wrong and I know that feeling well. You cant help who you love at all. So you shouldnt feel ashamed at all. I get why he stole yout heart. The thief is a good and simple analogy. There is nothing you can do when your heart feels love.

    The treasure is your heart and love. When you are in love you have to give it your all to the other person. I do love how you continue how he is a thief. He stole your happiness and everything. I hate it when your heart feels empty. You will always heal again though. You are really brave to put this up. 5/5