Beautiful piece. When we are in love, we always care for others and that feeling is amazing! Such true emotions to see in this one. Loved the honesty within and the lovey dovey feeling.

Keep writing:)

It flows smoothly and effortless, it's not forceful, i think it's a great piece.

This poem speaks loud with love and flows very well.

I love this!! it reminds of this guy I've liked forever except we weren't friends . I love how you show people your feelings in this . it's just really pure.