So I've read this twice and my thoughts are so jumbled.....

I find this piece to almost be hopeless and sarcastic..Your metaphors had this tone to it that said a remembrance for true humanity is lost, and these bodies that are wasting away leaves no hope for the rest of society (you and me)

I really actually enjoyed all of this...the fragmented sentences, the descriptions, the repetitive line of a Cold dead body on the ground...

I almost feel this way in a sense...like there is no hope for humanity when all these people die from cruel acts...I get it.

Well written.

Personally, I like dark poems. The comparison in this piece is rlly great. You express how you feel and that's exactly what poetry's bout. Nice write :)

I love this poem! very good!