Murmured Apology

by Daylight Lucidity   Aug 7, 2013


Quiet, my soft, stitched heart,
You echo too loudly in the mausoleum
That is my chest. Bleed your love
Upon the floor on which you pool;
Soft whimpers heard never before
As I lay crumpled, a prisoner to my own mind.
I feel the shackles clutching my wrists.
The clangor haunting me and reminding me of
My tears. Fluid words flow
From bruised, bloody, lips
Murmuring an apology not meant to be heard.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    I love the emotion you portray here. the stiched heart means you have been hurt before. You want someone to save you but no one is your hero. I love the mausoluem line as you feel alone and can hear your echoing heartbeat as all you can hear is your own silence. Your mind is your own weakness with depression crawling through it. The shackles are your feelings getting the best of you. Clangor is a word not widly used so well done. I'm not sure what tears have to do with it though lol. A loud noise. I love how you apologize for nothing you did wrong. I love the sadness that this piece fills you with. As it shows your a true talent. 5/5

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