I love all the emotions here. The first stanza and the chours I love how you started that early. I love how you keep looking into her eyes as it shows how much you love this person. I think you can interpret it as you are falling in love with her over and over again. Breathe into me.... I like this line because when you are in love. You make each other smile and that is what matters in love. And you want to be together forever.

You have to let people in to fix their heart. The best line is the sunset sparking hope. There is always hope when your in love. When you heal a heart your true smiles shine through. I love everything about this poem though. The song is a fast paced and the flow is great. You write so very well!! 5/5