by Nick Aug 8, 2013
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
All around me |
by Hellon
I liked your title...it fitted in very well with the content of your poem. Very strong message in this poem...it is long and, normally I get slightly bored with lengthy poems but...you managed to hold my attention here. The only think I found distracting was the overuse of capital letters. That's the only suggestion I can make to improve this poem...in my opinion. |
by WintersAngel
I can't stop reading this..It's too perfect.. |
by WintersAngel
Oh wow. Fascinating. I'm honestly speechless. I love it. I love the style. Amazing write. |
by Nick
Thank you! It really means alot to me to get positive feedback; writing is a passion of mine, and this encourages me to keep pursuing it and become a better writer. |