Oh wow. Fascinating. I'm honestly speechless. I love it. I love the style. Amazing write.

I can't stop reading this..It's too perfect..

I liked your title...it fitted in very well with the content of your poem. Very strong message in this poem...it is long and, normally I get slightly bored with lengthy poems but...you managed to hold my attention here. The only think I found distracting was the overuse of capital letters. That's the only suggestion I can make to improve this poem...in my opinion.