Comments : Final goodbye

  • 11 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow this is a beautiful poem. The darkness and honesty of it is very deep. The person you are writing to seems to be some of the cause of the pain in your poem and they dont even seem to realise. I think anyone who reads this poem will understand the pain you are portraying so great job of relating to your reader.

    I hope this isn't a true poem about yourself. If it is, please keep strong. You are not alone, a lot of people feel the same way so please reach out to someone.

    Either way, great heartfelt poem. 5/5!

    • 11 years ago

      by UtterlyAlive

      This poem is true because I do cut and my parents do hate that I like black, even though I'm not goth and don't wear it all the time. Black is my Favourite colour and thats what I meant by not trying to like it. But, I'm not suicidal, I write poems like this to help people who are (I hope they do help) and as a replacement to cutting.

  • 11 years ago

    by govind singh tomar

    Wow! Your great writer...

  • 11 years ago

    by govind singh tomar

    Wow! Your great writer...