The kiss of a flame,
after the perfect
sketch.

^^I like this opening. For it shows desire that
has been sparked by a beauty...in a way its very romantic too!

The geometry
ignites the ice.
It falls, fiery particles.

^^I like how you have weaved nature and human feelings into one. I've an image of a very passionate couple in love. The word, "geometry" has taken the place of a woman's physique and one leads to another. Maybe I'm wrong but the message here sets a fiery, passionate mood.

The space shrinks.
Glided slope.
How can you stop?

^^Oh yeah..I will not delve deep into this. All I will say is I've enjoyed reading this! Excellent!