Love from a Vampire

by Daylight Lucidity   Aug 9, 2013


I feel eyes
On my back
The faster I walk,
The quicker they track.
I feel stone arms
Wind around my waist
My heart pounds in alarm
As your lips brush my face.
Closer to my neck
Your teeth graze lightly,
I become a weak mess
As your hands tighten around me.
I feel the sting
Of the bite, so bittersweet,
And as you greedily drink,
A flower appears before me.
Love from a vampire,
Addicting and sensual,
Pain turns to pleasure
As you uncage the hidden animal.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    I don't like how you didn't rhyme through out the poem but thats just a minor thing honestly. Or its a bit of a loose rhymes but it doesn't effect the poem.

    I love the dark love story though as it warms my heart. I know how much you love vampires. I love the paranoid feeling you have at first. It gives the reader a chilling feeling inside. Which I love. I love the lips across your face. It gives the sense that they truly love you. Then he bites your neck and gives you what you might want. I love the bittersweet part as it shows yourapprehenive feelings. On one hand you want to feel loved and the other you don't want to leave anyone behind. The last lines are great as you finally love the vampire back. Unlocking your inner feelings. Love it! 5/5

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