Comments : Dissolving love

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Aww sweetie I'm sorry this happened to you. You'll know where you belong soon.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kris

    Heart* This is so sad. So full of feeling. Great write. I am sorry to anyone who has to know pain like this.

    • 11 years ago

      by Curtis Young

      Thank you,i know it'll be alright in the end though :)

  • 11 years ago

    by JaM

    The title of this poem certainly intrigued me, love the pick of it. You get a general idea of the poem, but still makes you wonder what will follow. The first stanza is strong, I like that. In the second stanza, there is a minor spelling mistake; "hart" rather than "heart". I also found that the last two lines in your second stanza break your flow. It's not quite as smooth as the rest of it. You do however pick that back up in your last and third stanza. Overall, I enjoyed reading this poem. Please keep writing! 4/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Larissa amber

    In my opinion tht was never love. Longing to to take someones clothes off? Not love. That's lust. Love is gentle, kind, beautiful, satisfying, amazing... This is not love. Correct me if im wrong